From a practical point of view, argumentation is at the heart of the free response section of the AP exam. This can be particularly difficult with younger students who are taking their first AP history class. Properly organizing and planning essays can help our students to write more effectively and score higher on the exam
This blog post is a lesson that I do in class the week before the AP exam to remind students how to plan, think, and organize essays regardless of the historical reasoning process being assessed.
Connection to Course Framework and Standards Addressed:
Historical Thinking Skills: Claims and Evidence in Sources and Argumentation
Reasoning Processes: Comparison, Continuity and Change, Causation,
Learning Objective:
Class Time: 2 class periods (45–50 minute periods)
Overview: This lesson is focused on reminding students how to organize the LEQ while focusing on reviewing relevant content.
OVERVIEW (5 minutes):
ESSAY ORGANIZATION REVIEW (10 minutes):
II-IV. Body Paragraph Structure (number of body paragraphs will vary…2 body paragraphs is perfectly acceptable if you’re using multiple pieces of evidence).
Comparison |
Continuity and Change |
Causation |
II. MS Difference (and/or vice versa) Evidence 1 III. MS Difference (and/or vice versa) Evidence 2 IV. Similarity (and/or vice versa) OR another Significant Difference |
II. MS Change (and/or vice versa) Evidence 1 III. MS Change (and/or vice versa) Evidence 2 IV. MS Continuity (and/or vice versa) OR another Significant Change (and/or vice versa) |
II. MS Cause/Effect Evidence 1 III. MS Cause/Effect Evidence 2 IV. Alternative Argument (Additional cause/and of effect for a Counter-Argument) |
STUDENTS COLLABORATE (45 minutes–15 minutes for each prompt.):
DISCUSSION/REFLECTION (30 minutes-10 minutes for each prompt):
POSSIBLE RESPONSES BELOW IN RED
Thesis: The most significant similarity between the Russian Revolution of 1905 and the Russian Revolution of 1917 is that both revolutions were triggered by food crises that were a result of war.
BP 1 supports thesis: The effects of the Russo-Japanese War on the homefront compared with the effects of World War I on the homefront and how they triggered revolution
BP 2 supports thesis: Compare other similar causes to both revolutions (for example, Nicholas II was a weak leader, the peasants wanted/needed land reform, Russia was still an agrarian nation despite some attempts at industry)
BP 3 presents a counter argument: Despite the similarities the revolutions had different outcomes ...the 1905 revolution led to the creation of a Duma with the tsar’s power intact while the 1917 revolution led to the end of the Romanov dynasty and the beginning of Communist rule in Russia.
Thesis: The most significant cause of the Protestant Reformation were church abuses, most notably the sale of indulgences
BP 1 supports thesis: Discusses the sale of indulgences, simony, nepotism, and clerical immorality as the leading cause of the Reformation
BP 2 presents a counter argument: Discusses other significant causes, possible the economic/political benefits to princes/kings if they left the Catholic Church. Evidence could include the German princes and Henry VIII of England.
From a practical point of view, argumentation is at the heart of the free response section of the AP exam. This can be particularly difficult with younger students who are taking their first AP history class. Properly organizing and planning essays can help our students to write more effectively and score higher on the exam
This blog post is a lesson that I do in class the week before the AP exam to remind students how to plan, think, and organize essays regardless of the historical reasoning process being assessed.
Connection to Course Framework and Standards Addressed:
Historical Thinking Skills: Claims and Evidence in Sources and Argumentation
Reasoning Processes: Comparison, Continuity and Change, Causation,
Learning Objective:
Class Time: 2 class periods (45–50 minute periods)
Overview: This lesson is focused on reminding students how to organize the LEQ while focusing on reviewing relevant content.
OVERVIEW (5 minutes):
ESSAY ORGANIZATION REVIEW (10 minutes):
II-IV. Body Paragraph Structure (number of body paragraphs will vary…2 body paragraphs is perfectly acceptable if you’re using multiple pieces of evidence).
Comparison |
Continuity and Change |
Causation |
II. MS Difference (and/or vice versa) Evidence 1 III. MS Difference (and/or vice versa) Evidence 2 IV. Similarity (and/or vice versa) OR another Significant Difference |
II. MS Change (and/or vice versa) Evidence 1 III. MS Change (and/or vice versa) Evidence 2 IV. MS Continuity (and/or vice versa) OR another Significant Change (and/or vice versa) |
II. MS Cause/Effect Evidence 1 III. MS Cause/Effect Evidence 2 IV. Alternative Argument (Additional cause/and of effect for a Counter-Argument) |
STUDENTS COLLABORATE (45 minutes–15 minutes for each prompt.):
DISCUSSION/REFLECTION (30 minutes-10 minutes for each prompt):
POSSIBLE RESPONSES BELOW IN RED
Thesis: The most significant similarity between the Russian Revolution of 1905 and the Russian Revolution of 1917 is that both revolutions were triggered by food crises that were a result of war.
BP 1 supports thesis: The effects of the Russo-Japanese War on the homefront compared with the effects of World War I on the homefront and how they triggered revolution
BP 2 supports thesis: Compare other similar causes to both revolutions (for example, Nicholas II was a weak leader, the peasants wanted/needed land reform, Russia was still an agrarian nation despite some attempts at industry)
BP 3 presents a counter argument: Despite the similarities the revolutions had different outcomes ...the 1905 revolution led to the creation of a Duma with the tsar’s power intact while the 1917 revolution led to the end of the Romanov dynasty and the beginning of Communist rule in Russia.
Thesis: The most significant cause of the Protestant Reformation were church abuses, most notably the sale of indulgences
BP 1 supports thesis: Discusses the sale of indulgences, simony, nepotism, and clerical immorality as the leading cause of the Reformation
BP 2 presents a counter argument: Discusses other significant causes, possible the economic/political benefits to princes/kings if they left the Catholic Church. Evidence could include the German princes and Henry VIII of England.
Thesis: The most significant change in women’s experiences during the twentieth century was in politics as women gained the right to vote at the beginning of the century and held high offices by the end of the century.
BP 1 supports the thesis + discusses both changes and continuities: Discusses the changes in politics starting with voting rights after WWI and the fact that many women served in high offices by the end of the century including Margaret Thatcher in Great Britain.
BP 2 presents a counter argument that also discusses changes and continuities: Discusses how women have had more advances in the workplace. Evidence could include women as CEOs, increased average salaries for women, and a higher percentage of women in the workforce.
Thesis: The most significant change in women’s experiences during the twentieth century was in politics as women gained the right to vote at the beginning of the century and held high offices by the end of the century.
BP 1 supports the thesis + discusses both changes and continuities: Discusses the changes in politics starting with voting rights after WWI and the fact that many women served in high offices by the end of the century including Margaret Thatcher in Great Britain.
BP 2 presents a counter argument that also discusses changes and continuities: Discusses how women have had more advances in the workplace. Evidence could include women as CEOs, increased average salaries for women, and a higher percentage of women in the workforce.